User:Shabidoo/happymonkeycompetition/2014/Anton

From Romartus

Creativity	Humour	Originality	Total
10/10	9/10	10/10	29/30

Considering Anton is writing in his second language, I couldn't fault this at all except I only smiled rather than laughed. But excellent work considering the time constraints.

From Shabidoo

Creativity	Humour	Originality	Total
8/10	6.5/10	9.5/10	24/30

I have to say that this is one of the most original articles I've read in this competition. A narrative that goes all over the place but still has a sense of continuity and even a sort of beginning middle and end. Well done on the originality side. It's also rather creative. I didn't get a LOL and only a couple laughs but there was a humerous tone throughout. Good job.

creativity: ‘couldn’t be disturbed’, disguised as a housebreaker, local table factory.

humour: The man only smiled, even though they looked quite Canadian, asks to borrow five bucks., A ham and cheese sandwich, This knowledge comforted her slightly. I watched a pink elephant.

originality:and he will know why he is alone on a whole planet.

From Napoleon Khan

8/10

From The Wiki Man

0/10

From IFYMB!

9/10

From Sarah

8.5/10

Grand Total

49.5/100