User:Shabidoo/happymonkeycompetition/2014/Aleister
From Romartus[edit | edit source]
| Creativity | Humour | Originality | Total |
|---|---|---|---|
| 6/10 | 5/10 | 6/10 | 17/30 |
Tristam 'Aleister' Shandy essay. Original and creative but scored down for humour because that part didn't seem to be developed fully here.
From Shabidoo[edit | edit source]
| Creativity | Humour | Originality | Total |
|---|---|---|---|
| 9.5/10 | 5/10 | 8.5/10 | 23/30 |
There is no end to your creativity Ali and this article is utterly overflowing with it. Below I hilighted some particularily creative moments. As for humour...the article does have a humerous tone throughout...but I didn't laugh. I listed the three places in the article that made me smile. As for originality...yeah...your approach was very original, I was completely unable to see where the article was going nor what to expect and there certainly is no article like this on uncyclopedia. I like the article overall and I dig that it is confusing and difficult to read...but where is your signature humour Ali? In any case I do hope that you keep working on it. The article is there...just needs a couple LOL moments.
creativity: She painted her paintings' frames better than most of the masters painted their best paintings, There was sun where she lived. Totems too
humour:on or off my death couch, Getting back to the story, I'm peeing those little can't hold'it drops in my pants now ma
originality: very very original original.
From Napoleon Khan[edit | edit source]
7/10
From The Wiki Man[edit | edit source]
0/10
From IFYMB!![edit | edit source]
6.5/10
From Sarah[edit | edit source]
7/10
Grand Total[edit | edit source]
60.5/100