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User:WarWalrus/The Seventh Seal[edit source]

WarWalrus (talk) 15:12, 18 September 2013 (UTC)

Humour: 8.5 Hilarius maximus. Go ahead, expand it.
Concept: 7.5 Predictable. People kind of see the seal pun coming. However, building on that requires some calibre, I admit.
Prose and formatting: 6 Rushed. Plenty typing/grammatical errors. Plenty of time to correct them.
Images: 5 Wut? Ones that are there are funny enough. As I said, expand. Suggestions:
  • Seal scene with Swedish subtitles
  • Seal scene with poorly translated English subs
  • Seal scene with scrabble board?
  • Pingu Blood and Gore Edition?
Miscellaneous: 6.8 Expand it, add the sections for soundtrack, promotion, production etc.
Final Score: 33.8 Funny as fuck. Keep working on this, it's looking great so far.
Reviewer: Have a good day.  Tumb13weed Tumbleweed01.gif 19:45, 24 September 2013 (UTC)
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