Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/UnBooks:Tropic of Cancer
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UnBooks:Tropic of Cancer[edit source]
Hi, this was one of my first articles, I've done some work on it since then and although its' on the running ot be featured unbook I was wondering whether it might be something to consider for VFH-or perhaps more work. thanks fo yor time;)--— Sir Sycamore (talk) 14:28, 15 June 2008 (UTC)
TimeToPee!
Woah, back off there, 'cause it's TimeToPee...for Baseball16, not you. Sorry, you'll just have to go find somewhere else to empty your bladder, or you can choose to wet yourself. I got this spot, dick.
Woah, back off there, 'cause it's TimeToPee...for Baseball16, not you. Sorry, you'll just have to go find somewhere else to empty your bladder, or you can choose to wet yourself. I got this spot, dick.
| Humour: | 9 | HAHAHA Really funny. |
| Concept: | 8 | I loved your consept of the story.Maybe a little better here. |
| Prose and formatting: | 6 | No Comment. (Oh My God I just wrote a comment.) |
| Images: | 10 | I love the pictures and the captions. |
| Miscellaneous: | 9 | I like the story a lot |
| Final Score: | 42 | Good writing. |
| Reviewer: |  Founding Member Baseball16   15:20, 15 June 2008 (UTC)
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