Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/UnBooks:Hot Japanese Girls - Colourblind or Unable to Speak English? (quick)
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UnBooks:Hot Japanese Girls - Colourblind or Unable to Speak English? [edit source]
So I decided to spend my afternoon rewriting this in several areas. I was quite satisfied with the first review by UU and was I quite tempted by the mention of VFH. The largest problem appeared to be the consistency and tone of the prose, as well as the flow. I had another crack at the article, adding another image in the process. I transformed the instances within the text that seemed to make the 'British Gentleman' character rather irrelevant.
Anyway, the reason I want a quick review is because I wish to see if this article is in the path of VFH nomination, though suggestions can't hurt. --
17:43, 24 February 2009 (UTC)Humour: | 10 | Haha, This is a very funny article, I recommend this for VFH. |
Concept: | 10 | The concept is very good, I wasn't expecting it at all. |
Prose and formatting: | 10 | Well written, all good so far. |
Images: | 10 | I especially like the one with the cowboy, genius. |
Miscellaneous: | 10 | Because I still have no idea what this section means but averages at 10 |
Final Score: | 50 | I recommend this for VFH. |
Reviewer: | --Projectmayhem666 Talk 17:52, 24 February 2009 (UTC) |
- Looks like I got the best score in the world then. --
- Theres nothing wrong with the article and I like it, I've seen worse featured.--Projectmayhem666 Talk 18:02, 24 February 2009 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review, the score was a tad generous though. :) -- 18:05, 24 February 2009 (UTC)
17:59, 24 February 2009 (UTC)
- Theres nothing wrong with the article and I like it, I've seen worse featured.--Projectmayhem666 Talk 18:02, 24 February 2009 (UTC)