Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/HowTo:Create a sandstorm
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HowTo:Create a sandstorm[edit source]
This is my ecology page, a commentary on the environmental destruction of the topsoil from various sources. My other pee request, HowTo:Frighten small children is a page that no user should look at, so that's a page that should just sit there for seven days. This one, though, I would like comment on. Thanks, and no hurry. Appreciated.
Aleister in Chains 1:33 7 5 MMX
| Humour: | 9 | All around a solid, faultless creation. I would give a 10 score if you add a section listing the benefits and disadvantages of making a sand storm, otherwise, what's the consideration? Apart from having no listed criteria to consider, it's a done deal. But without a list of benefits its an action without a purpose. |
| Concept: | 5 | The how is missing the WHY? Why make a sand storm? Or not? |
| Prose and formatting: | 10 | Great! |
| Images: | 7 | Great shots, and big, good! But lets see what a bloody sand-storm looks like.. |
| Miscellaneous: | 10 | Good, creative layout |
| Final Score: | 41 | Unique, creative layout, very UnWiki, but funny. My only question are WHY? and lets see whata sand-storm looks like at 0 visibility. |
| Reviewer: | --Funnybony    15:43, May 7
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