Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/HowTo:Build a Computer
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HowTo:Build a Computer[edit source]
Just an article I did and got stuck with. i think it's okay, but I can't really get many jokes in other than what's in it already.
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PRIP EXPIRED Though Javascap reserved this Pee Review, he/she/it/Abominable Snowman has not yet completed it. You may claim the review by replacing his/her/its/Abominable Snowman's name with yours. |
Garionepsilon 09:47, 5 March 2008 (UTC)
| Humour: | 9 | I laughed inside at various places throughout this article. My personal favorite part was the Basic Ingredients section, specifically the mouse part. It was humourous, and tastefully referred to the article. |
| Concept: | 10 | Aconcept so simple, it is right in front of you… and I never would have thought of it. I absolutely loved the article. |
| Prose and formatting: | 9 | I found only 1 grammar error in the entire article. Your spacing and sentence structures were consistently good, and overall, GREAT JOB =D! (I fixed the error for you, just so you know.) |
| Images: | 8 | The images provided were good and relevant, with a good crack or two under them. Overall, enjoyable without overdoing it. |
| Miscellaneous: | 9 | Rounded as per pee review guidelines |
| Final Score: | 45 | Nominate for featured IMMEDITALLY! I absolutely loved this article, and I had to fight not to laugh out loud at various points. I applaud you for your work on this article, and look forward to seeing more from you. |
| Reviewer: | Warm regards, Javascap 19:38, 5 March 2008 (UTC) | |