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This is a rewrite. -- 19:43, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

And this is a pee review. Cat the Colourful (Feed me!) Zzz 05:14, 19 May, 2011 (UTC)

Humour:	9	Heh. This article sure is a bit indecent, if I now spelled it all right. I love fruits, and I kind of love this article too. I like that how the lovers speaks to themselfes, talking about fruits, something that isn`t quite a fruit (I mean carrots. Carrots of course.) but still talking about the fruit. For some reason, I got Lyrithya on my mind because those "Err..." and other things like that. But yes, the article is very humorous. That`s why I gave you 9.
Concept:	7	I`m a bit sorry of giving you 7. The consept is brilliant, but it ends up too quick. Continue that article article so I can give you something better. But the idea, 2 gays talking with themselfes about fruits with indecent way, it was nice. I liked that.
Prose and formatting:	8	Yes, the talking way got Lyri on my mind. Maybe a bit too much. Now I can`t get her out of my mind. Do you think so, Mr. Magic Lyrithya? Well, the formatting is nice, and those people talks with very geyish way, but not overused that. I mean, there are always somewhere on Uncyclopedia a gay-article, which is always, somehow, so badwritten that even the hardest gay would fall to tears. This is nice thing. So I give you an 8.
Images:	9	Hahaha... The first pic really promises things, and it keeps it quality to the end. There is also good texts under those pics. On the article we find that funny comment, that there should be a pic here also. And so there is. About an fish. On the end there we can see Jonathan and Sebastian, in a strange position. It makes me feel... unsafe... But those are good pictures, so, Magic Man, I give you a 9.
Miscellaneous:	8	Why the tmeplate won`t work? Anyhow, I give you 8
Final Score:	41	Completely nice and funny article, but keep working, because the end makes me freeze a bit.
Reviewer:	Cat the Colourful (Feed me!) Zzz 05:14, 19 May, 2011 (UTC)