UnNews talk:Man actually has a gun in his pocket, three dead

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From Pee Review[edit source]

Another one of my UnNews, except this got ICU'd. That was mostly because it didn't have a picture when the template was added (finding a picture for this article proved very hard, as I couldn't find one of a stiff businessman or something of the ilk). I added a makeshift picture to see if the template would be removed, but just in case I'll pee review it to see if it's up to snuff (and hear some other opinions, of course XD ) --T.K.F. 21:04, 12 April 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 6 Could be funnier. I can't think of anything that could make it funnier, but still.
Concept: 9 Great idea.
Prose and formatting: 8 Well formatted and writted
Images: 6 The image suffices, but a better image would improve the article.
Miscellaneous: 5 I just didn't find this as interesting as I thought after the first paragraph.
Final Score: 34
Reviewer: Icons-flag-au.png Sir Cs1987 UOTM. t. c 16:31, 14 April 2007 (UTC)