UnNews talk:Everything is shit

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Not a PLS contender in my eyes. Good intro and a cool concept, but degenerates quickly into randomness and finishes on a lol - paedophile note. 

Strip it back to the start of the second paragraph, maybe keep in about 10% of the rest, but rewrite the conclusion. Basically I'd like to see this go somewhere.  – Preceding unsigned comment added by PuppyOnTheRadio (talk • contribs)

Thanks mystery contributor, I'll see what I can do with it when everything's unlocked. --Black Flamingo 12:20, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry. I wrote the comment offline first and then copied it here while doing about ten other things and forgot to add a sig back in. Pup 09:03 08 Feb '11