Talk:GunZ: The Duel

16 December 2009 New Editing

Ey, I found this article and I must admit, it is in piss-poor shape. Out of pity I'm going to clean it up and add some new content that it desperately needs.

I fixed up the intro paragraph a LOT and changed the caption because it was unfunny.

I'm editing and adding tidbits of content here and there. I changed "Conversing with GunZ" to "Communication In-Game", as that makes more sense. Also I completely changed the shown conversation because the previous one was 100% unfunny in any way, and added a Slang & Jargon section because that's what gives GunZ its "snobby egotistical gamer community" personality.

I may add some pics as I see fit.

Something Berserkuh Had to Say a While Back

Everything here has been censored by Berserkuh.

For more information, join the GunZFactor Disfunctional Family.

gg

(Btw, the second half of this article has hrrblb splelping. I would correct it all, but then I decided that it would be more conveiniant to just bitch about it, so here I am.)

7 January 2009 Edit Summary

I made quite a bit of edits in one go, so this is a full summary and explanation before someone starts BAWWing. This is my one contribution to Unfunnypedia; appreciate it. Why did I choose to waste my time on this? Because it looks like it was written by a thirteen-year-old faggot.

Rewrite of everything.

The introduction states it's a drug. It should be referred to as one throughout the article for maximum funny.

"== "What the Hell is Gunz?" -Ijji CEO ==" to "==The Fuck is This Shit?=="

"GunZ" to "'''GunZ'''

It's the subject. Make it stand out.

"liquified" to "liquefied"

Spelling Nazi.

Rewrite of "Although the standard Gunz player is usually skinny, instead of a cheap ass little kids who play another horrible created piece of crap by IJJI, Soldier Front, all day, this is usually because they are burning calories by mashing about 9 keys and breaking their keyboards in the process."

GunZ wasn't created by IJJI, and there's really no humor in saying it was.

Removal of "== The Horrifying Truths =="

Unfunny. The era of Bush-bashing long ceased to be humorous; now you need a bit more sophisticated humor to win over that audience.

Rewrite of "Caution, after playing for more than 27 minutes" section.

Sounds stupid. Random numbers aren't nearly as humorous as you might think. DURR 42 LOLO. No. Also, unfunniness.

Removal of most player/clan names.

• === Teh Bucketz0000rr ===

Nobody cares.

Rewrite of "=== The GunZ Cult ==="

Unfunny. Consider complete removal.

Removal of "=== The GunZ Bible ==="

Unfunny. Waste of bandwidth.

Removal of "=== The Gods of GunZ ===

Nobody cares. See "Removal of most player/clan names". I left in "Jo Baba" because the accompanying image is amusing.

Rewrite of "== Hallucination Types =="

Unfunny. At least now the sarcasm will give people who know what I'm talking about a small chuckle. Also, removed some "wtf" sections.

Rewrite of "== Normal Conversation =="

Keeping in the drug theme.

"vaginas" to "shrunken penises"

Girls don't play GunZ.

"but no one cares about Win. Win Style is considered as 'hax' by Doink Stylers, Kool Stylers and Erectile Dysfunction Stylers." to "Bannable."

Unfunny; "bannable" is enough to let the reader know we're talking about hacking.

Retouch of "=== Forbidden Style ==="

Finally, something that's geniunely funny and related. Good job.

Removal of "==Gunz Hacking=="

Lolwut.

Modified name of external link.

Better.

Removal of "Thanks for looking at this"

The Jews.

Now the only remaining issue is the fact that the Styles section doesn't really seem to fit in considering GunZ is a game. 98.164.228.143 03:02, 8 January 2009 (UTC)

Oh, and if you're actually interested in editing seriously for GunZ: The Duel, be sure to check out the Wikia for GunZ here! 98.164.228.143 03:05, 8 January 2009 (UTC)