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From Pee Review[edit source]
Gerin oil[edit source]
A peculiar name I admit, but read it and you’ll get the gist. Any comments on improving it? Weri long wang 22:32, 24 May 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 4.5 | Well written but not all that hysterical. I think a diffrent approach from the religious angle is needed, unfortunatly it just dosen't seem to be working. |
| Concept: | 5 | Drugs and Christianity have been done quite a lot. |
| Prose and formatting: | 6 | Well written but needs a higher joke density. Make the humour less dry. |
| Images: | 3 | Nothing special. |
| Miscellaneous: | 5 | A bit more of this would improve it, by five million percent. |
| Final Score: | 23.5 | Overall it needs improvement. |
| Reviewer: | --Winstanley1 12:31, 25 May 2007 (UTC) | |