User talk:Zheliel/talk/My mother told me never to accept candy from strangers
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And they don't come much stranger no truly, my love goes out to you on the next jet plane Michael Jackson was taken away by aliens as he was truly too good for this world Farrah Fawcett was an alien on recon My medication tastes like dog food I want to - uh - I want to - Ah - I want to - Eh - and do bad things is it reviewing month already - that means that you will be looking into the faintest possibility of maybe reviewing a potential article that exists in the far reaches of L-space and never saw the light of day until my uncle made home brew and it tasted like old sock and there's two articles that have been done and many elephants try to eat my nose hairs but they misunderestimated the !EID ,REKCUF-REHTOM ,EID but I have never eaten a live sparrow before Mr Brady That's okay Wilbur I No mummy don't put the knitting needles in my ears never have seen the light of oh no Nathaniel no, there must be more to life, there has to be a way that we can hey kids rock and roll want you back for good whatever I said whatever I did I didn't mean it I just Hi. Pup RTOP
- Wha? Mr Brute! ~12:15/3/July
- Isn done review. Good! Isn done nice review! Good! Mes need more. More! MORE! MORE! MORE!!
- Aah, the randomised ranting of PuppyOnTheRadio when he's had too much cough medicine. Such a delightful sound. Like a circular saw made of finger nails through a blackboard. Brilliant. I just have a couple of things that I'd like constructive help with.
- Humour
- The Michael Hewitt-Gleeson and Eric Brienstock references are straight from Wikipedia, and there is no explanation on them at all. I actually did a little digging and the Wiki article has been changed due to supporters of this whack job and the references in italics are supposed to be supporting his claims. Re-reading it alojng with your review this doesn't come across unless you know the source, and most people won't, so I'm going to keep some of the references in there, but cull most of them.
- Humour
- I love your application method idea, and seriously wish that I had thought of it myself - hang on a second - no I did think of it myself, at that meeting I had, where you were taking the notes. I was thinking I might just drop in the image to the right and leave it at that. Saves me a thousand words...
- Prose and formatting
- Cull the references... got it... appreciate the detail here by the way. Types of hat v types of hats... I think the first is still grammatically correct, as here hat is being used as a group descriptor as opposed to an individual item, but your right in that the second will cause less friction, so change is a coming.
- Images
- Here I'm having the most issue - Andromeda is meant to be where it is as it was supposed to signify the absence of thought - it's hard to find an image of a void. You're not the first person to have commented on the location of the image though - it seems to be a media wiki expectation of where images should be that I haven't quite grasped yet. Also the purpose that the image is there for is obviously not clear enough... I'm thinking of culling that image and replacing it with white pixel stretched to same dimension with the same "bit of an echo in here" tag attached. Have you got any other ideas on how to demonstrate a lack of thought? Ummm, how to demonstrate that I am referring to a lack of thought? You know what I mean anyway...
- In short, I appreciate the feedback. Changes being made now.
- Pup who would love to be nommed for NotM, or appreciate a VFH for Vitiligo and I'm really enjoying that nurse picture...