UnNews talk:Microsoft declares war on Macintosh
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Just comment on this please, This is my first post and I wouldn't mind knowing if it is horrible good or needs work or even if it has potential. unsigned comment by Confkoso 00:32, 14 November 2006
- Interesting, but the first thing it needs is some reformatting, so I'll take care of that. --The Acceptable
Cainad 
(Fnord) 08:06, 14 November 2006 (UTC)
- Interesting, but the first thing it needs is some reformatting, so I'll take care of that. --The Acceptable
- Okay, it's been formattified. I think the only thing it lacks is a "clincher" at the end of each section. It needs a little more sarcastic snap. --The Acceptable Cainad (Fnord) 08:23, 14 November 2006 (UTC)
- Okay, it's been formattified. I think the only thing it lacks is a "clincher" at the end of each section. It needs a little more sarcastic snap. --The Acceptable