UnNews talk:Bush Makes Surprise Visit To White House

Brilliant premise, but some of the lines are a little forced. Try to use more tact with your satire; when something is as blunt as "I hardly ever do work there"... "or anywhere!" he added with hearty laughter., you lose your realism and thus take some of the edge off your humor. -- » Sir Savethemooses Grand Commanding Officer ... holla atcha boy» 02:15, 19 June 2006 (UTC)