UnBooks talk:The Von Stauberg Institute for Extreme Cardiac Stress Tests
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From Pee Review[edit source]
So, new piece, curious to get some remarks. Thanks. ~
23:09, 18 March 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 7 | I liked it. It had the ability to be better, but overall it was good. |
| Concept: | 8 | It was something original. I don't really see scripts on Uncyc. |
| Prose and formatting: | 6 | Maybe some more parenthesis and italicizing for descriptions and actions should be in order so it can look more script-ish. |
| Images: | 9 | You've got quite a few. |
| Miscellaneous: | 9 | As I said above, It's a script, and you rarely see something like that on Uncyclopdia(only 2 that I know of exist here not including this). |
| Final Score: | 39 | You could move it to UnScripts if you want since its written in a scriptish style. I like it, but It isn't anything that would probably would survive on VFH IMO. |
| Reviewer: | --~  01:16, 19 March 2007 (UTC)
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