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| Humour: | 7 | I enjoyed the twist on a real company and real people. It's very cleverly written. However, some of the later sections could be expanded; I feel like there's more humor that can be used in there. |
| Concept: | 8 | It's a clever idea with potential, and it's pretty original. |
| Prose and formatting: | 4 | You have an absolutely atrocious amount of Red Links in this article. Fix it! |
| Images: | 2 | You have one image, and it doesn't work. Add some images, they're out there, I know they are! An image of the logo, especially, would be good. |
| Miscellaneous: | 7 | I enjoy how you based this article in fact and simply twisted the facts to fit a world of canines. |
| Final Score: | 28 | The writing is very good, and this article has a lot of potential. However, there needs to be pictures; perhaps not of "nude dogs", but perhaps of Huffner, the logo, a joke cover, etc. You know what I mean; pictures that fit the humor of the article. Also, get rid of the red links; they're a huge distraction. |
| Reviewer: | Judgement 15:30, 17 February 2007 (UTC) | |