Talk:Enter the Dragon
i tried to fix this up by being loyal to the original writer's idea - i still dont like it though.
Thanks[edit source]
I like some of the things you added to the article i really appreciate it, but I agree it's still missing something.
Hating[edit source]
Some peopel are drinking hateroade before they read your article dud you were right you got a strong agaisnt? No way! This shit is so funny! I hope this article gets featured.--Gaberou 13:10, 9 November 2006 (UTC)
team effort[edit source]
seems quite a few of us had a hand in this - go go team!
Picture needed[edit source]
I think that it would be cool if we could get a picture of Bruce putting his arm through someone's stomach and having it come out the other way. That would be cool. If someone would like to photoshop a picture of that it'd be greatly appreciated.--Lt. wyoming 17:38, 10 November 2006 (UTC)
From Pee Review[edit source]
Humour: | 5 | Too much random nonsense. I'd recommend reading the HowToBeFunnyandNotJustStupid part of the Guidelines again. |
Concept: | 5 | This article has nearly nothing to do with the movie. If you decide on using a concept, it works out best if you hold to that concept. |
Prose and formatting: | 5 | Formatting is well done, but the grammar is a nightmare. Complaining about a single missed comma or capital letter is whining, but you really need to check this article through on mistakes. |
Images: | 6 | They're there. Some are not really functional, but that's not the biggest issue. |
Miscellaneous: | 5 | The trivia at the end should be either deleted or reworked, they really show the incoherentness of the article. |
Final Score: | 26 | Wow, that was harsher then I meant to be. To summarize the flawing point: hastiness. You made the bare bones for an article, but filled it up too quickly. It would be a shame to see your effort of creating a good frame go to waste. Best think about how to make for a funny filling. |
Reviewer: | --TheTerrorThatIsSkaPunk 13:52, 19 February 2007 (UTC)TheTerrorThatIsSkaPunk, 19 Februari 2007, 14:55 |