Talk:Barnegat

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Barnegat[edit source]

This is my first article, so I am looking for some constructive feedback to improve it. I am also looking for some suggestions and/or examples of what type of images to use for the article.

Thanks! John

Humour: 6.9 Good, I smiled and chuckled a couple times
Concept: 6 ?
Prose and formatting: 6 Nothing outstanding, work on this a bit
Images: 5 No images, get some please. Try some pictures of the undead or zombies, that would be pretty funny
Miscellaneous: 5.1 The article was a bit to long for it's own good. Shorten it a bit and add some more humour, as well as images
Final Score: 29
Reviewer: Spatz 18:44, 19 May 2007 (UTC)