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Hey, I was just wondering what people think of this article, and if they have any suggestions to make it any better -- Chuckman 02:36, 20 January 2008 (UTC)

Humour:	6.8	Pretty funny, with a pretty clever use of satire. Sometimes it borders on stupid, but usually it's good fun.
Concept:	7.2	The concept is pretty original and the symbolism is fresh.
Prose and formatting:	6.5	Some of the sections feel a bit short and cut off. The grammar is passable but needs work.
Images:	7.3	Overall, the pictures are relevant and good (I like the Nazi Ronald McDonald). Do you know if you could secure a picture of Hitler with a hamburger or find a picture of an Auschwitz furnace? It could possibly be better improved that way.
Miscellaneous:	7.5	Affecting the tilt.
Final Score:	35.3	Overall, I really liked the article. It was a very good use of satire. However, the grammar is pretty bad and sometimes makes it feel weird (I'll leave you to figure out the vagaries). Sometimes, it borders on stupid and not funny, but generally, it's a pretty good article.
Reviewer:	Parsat, or, A Whole Bunch of Mischief 01:00, 8 February 2008 (UTC)