User:Shabidoo/happymonkeycompetition/2014/MagicBus
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From Romartus[edit | edit source]
| Creativity | Humour | Originality | Total |
|---|---|---|---|
| 5/10 | 5/10 | 5/10 | 15/30 |
Seems a bit rushed and short. Not sure this is the full biscuit. Illustrations are good.
From Shabidoo[edit | edit source]
| Creativity | Humour | Originality | Total |
|---|---|---|---|
| 6/10 | 6.5/10 | 6/10 | 18.5/30 |
This is a pretty good effort for a first time happymonkey. Your intro and first section were funny and creative. Good marks for that. Too bad you wrote so little. Good work with what you did pull off though.
creativity: Mostly in the intro and the first section
humour:Eat Ice Cream Day (this line shouldn't be funny and I don't know why I laughed but I did). If you believe in what the Mayans do then you don't exist. (very funny).
originality: Mostly in the intro and the first section as well.
From Napoleon Khan[edit | edit source]
5/10
From IFYMB![edit | edit source]
4/10
From Sarah[edit | edit source]
5/10
From TheWikiMan[edit | edit source]
0.5/10
Grand Total[edit | edit source]
48/100