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Tattoo 16:44, 31 March 2008 (UTC)

Humour:	4	Not meaning this too harshly, but you definitely need to read HTBFANJS and look at the Featured articles. To me, a 5 is not funny, but not pointless. Frankly, this article bumped into pointless. I understand that the first article is the hardest to write, and it will take effort before your articles make front page, so don’t take this too harshly.
Concept:	5	Making up a town and writing a satire article might sound easy, but frankly, it isn’t. you have to explain what the article is about, write a satire, jab out false information, and give a straight face throughout the entire article. I understand that you tried, but it was not exactly taking satire to its highest.
Prose and formatting:	3	This is the section that DEFINITALLY needs the most work. Your quote introductions are simply WAY too many, and improperly formatted. You honestly do not need 7 made up quotes, I would say that 3 is more then enough. To properly format quotes, use this… “What the person is saying” ~ who said it on What they are talking about You also ran into quite a lot of other problems, “If they get pissed from this article”, for example, is not correctly written. You also do not have a single blue link in this entire article (A blue link is constructed by placing two [‘s and two ]’s with the text between them.) and you do not have a single category. Categories are placed by pressing shift, and placing {{}} into it. Between them, use CATEGORY:Category name here Yet another problem is that, as written, the top of the page uses almost as much text as the bottom of the page, and the sections are entirely too short.
Images:	2	With only one image, and no caption under it, I can hardly give much of a score. To place text under an image, see the example in this box (Press edit to see the source code) Insert your desired text here.
Miscellaneous:	3.5	Avg’d as per Pee Review guidelines
Final Score:	17.5	At this moment, this article is VFD fodder, and needs a lot of work to get it up to the standards of Uncyclopedia. Here is the work you have to do Fix the quotes, using the templact provided, and decide which three best contribute Place a caption under the image, and add in another Read HTBFANJS Add in categories, using the template provided Ask for some help from the proofreading service If you have ANY questions at all about this article, feel free to leave a message at my talk page.
Reviewer:	Warm Regards, Javascap