User:Zombiebaron/TAW 2012 Judgery

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The Exorcist[edit | edit source]

Humour: 8 Regrettably, I have never seen The Exorcist. I was gonna watch it tonight, but then I watched Taxi Driver instead. But anyway, all that stuff about people getting killed on the set is pretty funny.
Concept: 8 Definitely has a concept, and I like how it slowly crept into the article.
Prose and formatting: 10 No spelling or punctuation errors as far as I know.
Images: 6 Good use of images (I assume they are stills from the film). I'm not sure if I'm the only person who finds images on the left side of articles to be strange, but I'm just gonna say right now that I do. I have never seen a Wikipedia article with images down the left side.
Miscellaneous: 7 I'm gonna go get a torrent of The Exorcist right now.
Final Score: 39 A very enjoyable read, definitely feature quality.
Reviewer: Zombiebaron


Six Degrees of Oscar Wilde[edit | edit source]

Humour: 6 I do not enjoy math, science, or Oscar Wilde jokes. But I do recognize that there is humour in this article that might be funny to somebody else.
Concept: 6 For sure has a concept, it's just not a concept that I like. The first thing I thought when I saw this article is that it was a parody of this article from 2005, but then it wasn't.
Prose and formatting: 9 I'm gonna deduct one point here because of the redlinks. Other than them everything is fine.
Images: 8 You get several extra points here for using and image by Kakun.
Miscellaneous: 6 If you're gonna write a heavily scientific or mathematical article, my advice is to write it as though you were Bill Nye The Science Guy.
Final Score: 35 Oscar Wilde hasn't been a funny joke since November 3rd 2006.
Reviewer: Zombiebaron


HowTo:Express Yourself In Song[edit | edit source]

Humour: 7 Made me smile.
Concept: 10 Awesome concept. Very well execute.
Prose and formatting: 7 There are no interwiki links. Also, by making your article so vertical you have left lots of ugly whitespace on the right side of the page.
Images: 7 The images weren't funny. There were well used and informative.
Miscellaneous: 7 Very nice concept.
Final Score: 38 I liked the concept.
Reviewer: Zombiebaron


White Men Can't Jump[edit | edit source]

Humour: 6 Gonna give you the same score here that I gave to the Six Degrees of Oscar Wilde article above, for the same reason.
Concept: 5 The concept felt cliché to me.
Prose and formatting: 10 No spelling or punctuation errors.
Images: 9 Like I say above on this page, images on the left side of the page don't seem every encyclopedic to me. Other than that, you have good captions that make the images relevant and funny.
Miscellaneous: 6 I think this article could be improved by making it much more insulting of white people.
Final Score: 36 Overall a mostly well formed article.
Reviewer: Zombiebaron


Cheers[edit | edit source]

Humour: 0 As far as I know this whole paragraph is just facts about the show Cheers.
Concept: 5 I guess "A Paragraph Of Facts About Cheers" counts as a concept.
Prose and formatting: 10 No spelling or punctuation errors.
Images: 0 There are no images.
Miscellaneous: 10 Great length.
Final Score: 25 This paragraph just needs one or three good images and it's a guaranteed featured article.
Reviewer: Zombiebaron


Antifreeze[edit | edit source]

Humour: 10 Seriously funny.
Concept: 10 Wow great concept.
Prose and formatting: 10 No mistakes as far as I can tell.
Images: 7 As I mention above I'm taking off points for images on the left side. Also, I feel it needs another image. Maybe of some kids playing Antifreeze Kings.
Miscellaneous: 10 Most enjoyable article that I judged.
Final Score: 47 Somebody should put this on VFH when the contest is over.
Reviewer: Zombiebaron


Bazooka[edit | edit source]

Humour: 7 But I feel like I'm laughing at it, instead of with it.
Concept: 5 Standard encyclopedic-style article.
Prose and formatting: 8 You lose points for the orange box and the quotes at the top of the page.
Images: 6 There's a URL in the second image!!
Miscellaneous: 7 It's always nice to see writer's I'm not familiar with entering contests.
Final Score: 33 This article could benefit from a real Pee Review.
Reviewer: Zombiebaron