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Physical Chemistry[edit source]

🐍🐍How do you turn Silver Cobra on🐍🐍 08:57, 13 March 2019 (UTC)

That's a pretty good article there, although the subject is broad and the article is a little short. Also, the headings are too big. It makes no sense for the title of each section to be the same size as the title of the article itself, such a design makes me feel like I'm in the Twilight Zone. The subject material is a little heavy and would be better handled by someone who knows what they're talking about like Stephen Hawking, but your limited understanding is a good start. I'd suggest adding in a few more science jokes, everyone always goes for those. Finally, there's no images. I can draw you an image if you want, free, it's a public service I do around here, and you can even tell me how you'd want it to look. Anyway, that's what I think of your article. Loads of untapped potential. Nicolassequeira (talk) 03:43, 11 May 2020 (UTC)

I agree with Nicoassequeira. The length is a bit short but not a big problem. Adding an image would be nice. Definitely add a few nerdy jokes (see Al Gebra). P.S. Fixed the title sizes. Hipponias (talk) 09:00, 6 September 2020 (UTC)

Humour: 4 Kinda funny, though still dry. Everyone likes nerdy jokes.
Concept: 9 Very good concept, and could be funny with some improvements. Maybe make the article about a cult or rock band.
Prose and formatting: 8 Good formatting, althought the 'laws' section could be a list.
Images: 1 Where are the images? You don't need to potatochop any image, just make an ordinary one amusing.
Miscellaneous: 6 Average.
Final Score: 28 Alright article, although still could be improved a lot. Could see a lot of effort was put in. Keep at it, you will definitely improve over time.
Reviewer: ~ HipponiasCUN Talk - Contribs - Articles