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.22[edit source]
PC MAJOR 00:07, 3 October 2008 (UTC)
| Humour: | 5 | Ok, I get it, .22 caliber is a really small round. But, it just seems a bit forced, the whole article. And I didn't laugh much, but for some reason, killing jamacian zombies is FUNNNNY! that was good. |
| Concept: | 4 | I don't know why you tohught that there were a lot of gn enthusiasts on uncyclopedia. I get it, but I'm not sure many other people will. The joke of this article is that a .22 is small, but not many people really understand that sort of thing. |
| Prose and formatting: | 5 | Ok, it was good, there were no big errors, I didn't have any problem, I didn't read it TOO closely however. Anyway, there were not blatent errors. |
| Images: | 3 | The image is pretty boring, it wasn't funny. Maybe a picture of a jamacian zombie would spice things up. |
| Miscellaneous: | 0 | Eh... |
| Final Score: | 17 | It just needs to be funnier, maybe more random so even if people don't get the gun joke in it, they'll still get a laugh. |
| Reviewer: | --Kowaru 22:05, 5 October 2008 (UTC) | |