Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Ken Foree

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Ken Foree[edit source]

Ken Foree is a very famous actor with a cult following. He played the black guy in the original Dawn of the Dead, the televangelist in the remake, and Kenan's dad Roger Rockmore on Kenan and Kel, among many others. Not to mention, he's "Joe Grizzley, bitch!" in Halloween (2007). How come it took so long for somebody to write an article on this guy?

Let me know if it needs any more work. Thank you. Black-2.jpg PF4Eva, the President of Imagination Vote for me My tax returns 23:05, 19 February 2008 (UTC)

Humour: 5 You're good at being subtle and good at being nonsensical, but the article doesn't seem to be consistant with one or the other. The baldness is an example of blunt silliness, whereas the Keenan and Kel is an example of more subtle humor. You should try to stick to one or the other, or find a better way of blending them.
Concept: 8 You know alot about Ken Foree, and as far as he's concerned, the article is awesome.
Prose and formatting: 5 Besides the shifting humor, you tend to list; i.e., with careers. I've also noticed a few out-links, which I think can e removed (i.e. boxing).
Images: 8 A lot of images, looks good.
Miscellaneous: 8 I noticed you made/adjusted the pages that relate to the article, that's good.
Final Score: 34 Good, just needs slight adjustment on humor and writing voice. Otherwise a notable article. Oh, and remove the reference to the AAAAAAAAAAAAAAA page.
Reviewer: 99.240.53.250