UnDebate talk:Is it the size of the ship or the motion in the ocean?
Jump to navigation
Jump to search
There should be pictures all the way down both sides. MrN 
00:29. Mar 30. 2013
- Not just pictures of girls either! Need stuff on either side to balance it off like it was b4... The subtle one side, the not so subtle on the other... :) Try to format it like it was b4 with the images on either side left and right only. I don't like the pics leading at the top at all. Should be down the sides. MrN
01:07. Mar 30. 2013
- Actually, I don't know the code to get it to do just that. Which is one of the problems I had on my Facebook article I was writing. So you're going to have to be a wee bit lenient. 01:11 3.30.13
Pee Review[edit source]
| Humour: | 8 | For the most part, this article is excellent. A brilliant debate topic to begin with, excellent questions posed to the two sides, and excellent answers to go with them. It really goes to show how many gray areas there are in the art of sex. My biggest criticism would have to be the ending, wherein you apparently had an admin try out the two guys. Revealing the big dick's guy to actually be small, and declaring the small dick guy to be the "winner" may have brought closure to the debate, but I didn't find the section as funny as what had preceded it. I personally believe you're better off sticking to the question-answer format, and I also prefer debates that don't have winners, but rather end with the moderator getting sick of his job and shooting them both. |
| Concept: | 9 | Like I said, an excellent topic for a debate. Jokes about sex are very commonplace. Intelligent, very well-drawn out jokes like this article are the precious gems that make the existence of such commonplace jokes worth it. |
| Prose and formatting: | 8 | Well formatted, for the most part, although I rearranged the order of the second question responses to make them less confusing. Also, if you want to stick with the block log finale, you should come up with a better header than the rather confusing "Bans". |
| Images: | 8 | A big-ass ship. Works just fine for me. |
| Miscellaneous: | 8.3 | Averaged, thanks to Template:Pee |
| Final Score: | 41.3 | A very good article on the whole, with an ingenious debate topic to choose, and really good jokes throughout. Like I said, I have some issues with the ending. If you could write a better one, I won't hesitate to endorse a vfh nomination for this, if that's what you're planning. |
| Reviewer: | Lord Scofield Stark 13:52, 28 March 2013 (UTC) | |