UnBooks talk:Lost Diary of John Walters

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I wrote this during my Year 9 English Comedy exam and have adapted it (quite badly) for Uncyclopedia. It got 100% in the exam (including an excellence in humour) and I hope I've done it justice. Having said that, I know it's nowhere near being feature-worthy, so any ideas, thoughts, reviews etc. are welcome to anybody with a better sense of humour than I do. {Ikabu}BUZZ...FLICK...GURGLE... 09:36, 1 June 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 6 Not enough content to make me laugh...or is that the point?
Concept: 8 Genius idea.
Prose and formatting: 5 Eh,....
Images: 6 Nothing stands out except that elephant cut out in the brick wall.
Miscellaneous: 3 John Walters...nuff said.
Final Score: 28 It's got something, but it's so short I never found myself laughing and it lacks clever content.
Reviewer: --Dr. Fenwick 20:33, 1 June 2007 (UTC)