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I couldn't think of much. Tell me what you think of it so far and what you think I should add. --Sir OCdt Jedravent CUN UmP VFH PLS ACS WH 00:57, 29 March 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 7 | Funny in a quick, short way, like, its not like an article that I will keep laughing over for ages, but not a dud stub either. The start was quite funny, and the jokes about the french and US system was hilarious. |
| Concept: | 7 | The concept was quite hard to grasp, it just seemed like an article which parodies a modern army in general, it didn't really stick to generals themselves. I also don't see how it was sporked from [[1]] |
| Prose and formatting: | 7 | The prose was good. I don't see how it can be improved, but it's not brilliant either. |
| Images: | 0 | NEEDS IMAGES!!!!11one1!!!! |
| Miscellaneous: | 3 | Was a bid clogged up and unnoticable, like, if I was scrolling through Special:Random I wouldn't notice and read it the whole way. The dead links also did get quite annoying. |
| Final Score: | 24 | When you get right down to it, this was a very funny, tad bit listy, stubby, article. Add more images, get rid of the dead links, extend slightly, and voila! you have a feature. |
| Reviewer: | -- 09:34, 29 March 2007 (UTC)
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