HowTo talk:Make a Four Year Old Laugh

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From Pee Review[edit source]

read this article one too many times; cannot detect funnyness/unfunnyness anymore. --AmericanBastard 21:41, 30 December 2006 (UTC)

Humor

7/10 - This is very good, in my opinion. There's a lot of substance, even if the ideas being explained aren't rocket science, but it's exactly what you'd expect from this sort of article. Good stuff.

Concept

7-10/10 - It seems that the article might write itself, with the predictable 'fart' and 'die' methods. However I like the way you've taken it a bit further, especially with the bungee thing.

Formatting and Prose

8/10 - Nothing wrong with it, tickles my funny bone anyway.

Images

7/10 - Where did you get the third image from? Anyway, it fits very well with the concept being explained there. The second one also illustrates the article well. Good.

Final Opinion

29/40 - Is very good. With a bit of polishing, a couple more methods and another good picture, I'm sure it would do well.

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